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Alright this week I had to write a metaphor poem in the third person. I had some real trouble writing this thing and had to take some inspiration from Supernatural, Dragon Ball Z, and some eighties music to finally make this and print 14 copies 40 minutes before class. Please critique and give potential titles names.

The boy is ardent yet apathetic
He struggles for his own way, to accomplish his own feats
A hatchling marooned in a nest, he wishes to descend.
He is not afraid...
He is not afraid of the world below.
He is fearless-- callous to all but himself.

In timidity, he lulls before the edge.
A fledging falcon, hardly out of its spring
Clinging to the nest in the old tree.
Snap. The branch beneath him breaks.
From sweet Arcadia, from grace the raptor drops
Tumbling into perdition unknown.
Unaware of what awaits him...

From the bottom he rises.
Reborn with new ambition
An ascending bird of incandescent fire.

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MightyRaptor Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Hi
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flailingXmartian Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello
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MightyRaptor Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Glad to meet ya!
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flailingXmartian Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad to meet you to MightyRaptor!
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Nao-Dignity Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
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AaragonNega Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the favorite on my Evangelion artwork! I'm honored you liked it and it's great to meet you!
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flailingXmartian Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, you're very welcome.
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the watch! :heart:
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flailingXmartian Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome
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kaffemugg Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
Thanks for the fave on In the wind! :)
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